2009年12月31日木曜日

Looking back at 2009: Mark's Top 10 Events

First of all, Happy New Year to everyone and thanks for all the help and support you have given me and my family in 2009. Without you, we wouldn't have been able to have the fun, peaceful and meaningful year that we had. Thank you!

I want to separate the Top 10 into Top 5s for professional and personal/family:

Top 5 Teaching/Learning Events:
Top 5 Personal/Family Events
The best things in life are not necessarily the big events, but the day to day joy of waking up together, eating, playing learning, and saying good night with hugs and kisses. We are very blessed that we can do that and that, all by itself, made 2009 a beautiful year!



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2009年12月22日火曜日

Travails of a 'young war criminal' | The Japan Times Online

Travails of a 'young war criminal' | The Japan Times Online

In this article, a very important point is made about how leaders of powerful countries (Bush and Blair in this case) will never be prosecuted for violating international laws in attacking an independent country such as Iraq for no reason (no WMDs) other than the fact that they didn't like the leader. Is Kim next? Chavez? China?

Who will be held accountable for causing deaths of over 100,000 in Iraq in attacks based on false premises?

Although I support the idea of removing evil dictators and replacing them with democratic governments, we can't just invade and kill.

As we begin to study to Visions of the Future unit this term, this forces us to rethink how international laws and agreements should be redesigned so that they are enforced fairly regardless of who breaks them. When should international arms intervention into human rights violations be justified and what should be the procedure for such decisions? Can one group of countries (the "good" guys) move in and take out the bad guys? Is that what we want?

2009年12月18日金曜日

ARW Winter Notes for 12/18 - Discussion on fears of cloning

Some of the questions we discussed in class were:
  1. Will we be able to copy a soul? It is clear to most of us that a clone is only a copy of DNA, not a copy of the soul or personality (Though Clonaid and the Raelians, who claimed in 2002 that they cloned a human girl and many other clones since, would disagree--they think cloning is the path to immortality--scary cult). However, in the future, with a more advanced understanding of the brain, will it become possible to copy someone's "brain" including memories, knowledge, personality and so on? It is difficult to imagine how this could be done, but since the brain consists of electronic signals and chemicals, it may be a matter of time. On Wikipedia, there is a page that explains such Mind Uploading as the ultimate development of neuroinfomatics. If you like classics, see also the Ship of Theseus.

  2. Should we be allowed to clone pets? I think this possibility will come about quite soon because the attractiveness of this option for pet owners and breeders is quite obvious. However we should consider the implications of beginning to choose exactly what kind of animal we are going to get. Although we already do that to some extent by buying pets in stores or breeding them with "good genes," cloning means we will get "exactly" what we expect and that means we may lose our ability to accept weaker or less than perfect pets (and eventually people)?

Reactions to Silver p.6-12

Summary

III. Cloning Enters Public Culture - Where do our perceptions of clones come from? Where do your perceptions come from?:
First, Silver introduces some of the main "public culture" books and movies in the 1970s and 80s that gave people various images of clones. Then he explains the Hall-Stillman experiment in 1993, which was the first scientific report related to the concept of "cloning humans." However, in Silver's view, the negative reactions (like those of the Vatican and the EU) to the Hall-Stillman experiment were irrational because they were only separating "early human embryo cells" and letting them develop independently, which is basically how twins are made. Silver thinks the negative reaction occurred mainly because the word "clone" and "human" were used in the same media story.

IV. From Sheep to People
- Is it possible? Will scientists do it?: Silver argues that nuclear transfer cloning technology for humans will probably work because it has worked for many types of animals. However, more experiments on many animals will be needed before scientists can say human cloning is safe, with no birth defects and no health problems after birth. Theoretically, Silver thinks the number of birth defects in cloned children might be less than natural reproduction. Finally, Silver suggests that finding doctors who are willing to make human clones will probably be no problem.

V. What are the two main Cloning Misperceptions that lead to fear?: Silver thinks people are afraid of cloning for two main reasons. First, people don't have a clear sense of what a "clone" is. Many people mistakenly think that cloning copies not only the DNA, but also the person's experiences, memories and personality. This is obviously impossible. Cloning can only copy biological DNA ("life in the general sense") not a person's life experiences and soul. Second, people have the misperception that a clone will be "imperfect" compared to the original and have no soul or empathy. However, as long as the technology is safe, the clone will be a unique individual with their own life, just like a twin has a unique life.

Critical Reactions / Discussion Questions (with My Opinions)
  1. On p.6, Silver introduces movies that talk about cloning "leaders" such as Hitler. If you could clone a famous person from the past, who would you clone? Personally, I cannot see the point of cloning a leader because the clone would never be the same as the leader, right? But is it possible that some groups will try this? That would be tragic.

  2. p.7 "The embryos were discarded" after the Hall-Stillman experiment in 1993 and that led to outrage from various sources such as the Vatican. What do you think about the word "discarded"? Do you think it should say "embryos were murdered"? Should we see embryos as human or not? That is a key point in bioethics.

  3. Also on p.7, Silver calls the separation of embryos into twins, "a mimicry of nature". Is that true? Is it just copying nature? I think that is an oversimplification.

  4. p.8, "Humans are nothing more than glorified monkeys" Agree? Personally, I think we have to think we are special and not just monkeys in some way to maintain our self-respect. However, I also feel that accepting we are just one part of nature may be a good stance.

  5. Should scientists stay away from cloning research, or should they do it? Should scientific curiosity have limitations? If so, what kind?

  6. Is a clone really just a "later born identical twin - nothing more, nothing less"? Is this description accurate?


    Brave New World movie link

2009年12月16日水曜日

ARW Winter Class Notes - 12/16 W

Following an introduction of recent news of how China is officially allowing human cloning research for stem cell therapies to proceed, we confirmed the process of how human cloning would work, and then watched a video where Dr. Silver argued that the only concern should be technical safety.

After group discussion and reports, I felt some of the most interesting questions discussed by students were:
  1. What are the possible benefits of human cloning? (Being able to have a genetically connected child, harvesting organs?, avoiding genetic diseases by cloning healthy persons etc.)
  2. Why do people fear clones? (Misperceptions that they are "different" somehow etc.)
  3. What are the main problems or issues that may come about as a result of allowing human cloning for reproductive or organ therapy purposes? (identity, cloning for business etc.
  4. If you were unable to have a child, and had a choice between cloning, adoption, surrogacy, and remaining childless, which would you take?
Personally, regarding No.4, I think I would choose adoption. However, if some people feel that cloning is the best choice, it should be available to them.

2009年12月15日火曜日

Intro to Bioethics of Human Cloning, Silver 106






Lee Silver photo Remaking Eden: How Genetic Engineering and Cloning Will Transform the American Family (Ecco)
We'll be reading a chapter from Remaking Eden: How Genetic Engineering and Cloning Will Transform the American Family by Dr. Silver of Princeton University. See his bio sketch and website here.


First, here is a diagram of what human cloning through "nuclear transplantation" would entail.



Also, here's a page with a 5 min. video about the ethical issues of cloning humans.

Here's a 6 min. video of Silver talking about his views of the possibility of cloning and the legitimacy of experimenting with embryos (cells are not life). The original source of the video is not clear. Discovery Channel?



Here's Silver in a debate at Boston University regarding Human Cloning.



Summary of Silver p.1-6
Silver starts by telling the story of Dolly the Sheep and how the announcement of her cloning in 1997 shocked the world. The general public and many types of experts opposed the notion of human cloning and funding for cloning research was withdrawn from Ian Wilmut. Silver predicts that human cloning will become possible in the future, but the question is whether it will be safe or not. Then he goes on to explain that cloning single-cell organisms and vegetables is easy, but cloning animals is more difficult because adult cells are already differentiated into skin, bones, heart, brain and other organs. However, the technique of nuclear transplantation, which was used with Dolly allows biologists to remove the nucleus of an adult cell and transplant it into an egg. (See the diagram above) This was first successful with frog eggs in the 1960s, but was considered impossible with mammals until Dolly.

Critical Reactions / Discussion Questions (4 in total):
  1. He writes on page 3 that "the demand for cloning from individuals and couples is sure to be stronger than ICSI (In vitro fertilization)" but I wonder why he thinks so. Is it because cloned children will be able to avoid genetic abnormalities such as Down's Syndrome?

  2. On p.5, he reports that "WE blamed mother nature herself" for the difficulty of cloning adult DNA. I wonder how widespread that belief or assumption was. Did scientists really feel that something superstitious like mother nature was interfering?

  3. My main discussion question, naturally, is "Should cloning be allowed if it is safe in the future?" My personal answer to this, at this point, is that we should allow it as a choice for infertile couples, respecting their autonomy. Frankly, it is probably unstoppable because doctors will provide it once the technology exists, so it may be better to allow it and regulate it. I don't see much harm compared to natural reproduction. Clones are just latter day twins, aren't they? Most counterarguments sound like fear of the unknown rather than any definitely predictable detriment or rights violation.

  4. Another discussion question I hope we will discuss is whether a cloned human, if born, should be treated differently than a naturally reproduced human. I strongly believe that the cloned person should be treated exactly the same.
What do you think?

What is Success? Video by John Wooden

One of my presentation class students blogged on this speech by legendary UCLA basketball coach John Wooden. His definition of success is worth remembering:

"Success is peace of mind which is a direct result of self-satisfaction in knowing you made the effort to become the best that you are capable of becoming."



One of his favorite poems on teaching:
"No written word, no spoken plea, can teach our youth what they should be. Nor all the books on all the shelves -- it's what the teachers are themselves." (Source not given)

2009年12月14日月曜日

ARW Winter Class Notes - 12/14 M

Students did P&Ds of their essay topics for about 15 min. each in groups of 4, presenting their essay's topic, research question, thesis, and supporting arguments for about 5 minutes and then leading a discussion to receive questions and comments from classmates.

Is this type of discussion useful to students in developing their essays?

Pros:
  1. It should be useful to talk about their opinions and see whether classmates find them persuasive.
  2. As we talk about our ideas, they usually become clearer to us.

Cons:
  1. If students have not done much research yet, or are unable to explain their topic well, it may be difficult for classmates to help them or give reactions.
  2. Should this only be done in tutorials or outside class among friends? Is the peer discussion valuable to students?

What do you think? I hope my students (current or past) will let me know!

2009年12月13日日曜日

Bioethics Issue: Psychiatric Drugs

New York Times Online:



These research results were very disturbing for me. Doctors need to stop prescribing antipsychotic drugs when they are not needed, and Medicaid (the medical support system for poor families) needs to provide for inexpensive counseling and therapy for families that cannot affort them.
What's the situation in Japan? Are Japanese doctors prescribing antipsychotic drugs to children and teenagers?

2009年12月11日金曜日

ARW Winter - 12/9 Class Discussion Notes

On Wed, students brought in their various reactions and discussion questions regarding the Shannon article about bioethical theories and terms. During the discussion and reporting time, some of the interesting questions that I heard were:
  1. If you had terminal cancer, would you try to fight and cure it, or would you enjoy life as much as possible? (This class was split on this)
  2. If you had a terminal disease, would you want the doctor to tell you or not? (Most people seemed to want to know)
  3. What's the dividing line between autonomy and paternalism? (The Japanese government may be too paternalistic when it comes to some issues such as sexuality--the majority is deciding for the minority. More choice should be allowed.
  4. What ethical theory does Shannon seem to support the most? (He has a Catholic background, so he may have a deontological bias, but it is not clear)
  5. What ethical theory do most Japanese people feel comfortable with? (Intuitionalism?)
I enjoyed hearing reports of interesting questions and points at the end. But I also wanted to hear more critical reactions to Shannon. Perhaps I should divide the reporting for critical reactions and free discussion questions? Maybe I will consider that for the Silver discussions next week.

2009年12月10日木曜日

Getting students to contribute to the Net

This is still a half-baked thought, but I want students in all of my classes to participate in the construction of knowledge on the Internet.

For example, why not have a project where students create or edit a Wikipedia article?

Why not ask students to write book reviews on Amazon, or movie reviews on IMDB, the internet movie database?

Why not have students pose their questions on Yahoo Answers and share what they get?

Tagging for social bookmarking like Delicious contributes to sorting knowledge for others.

Creating something in WikiHow is another way.

When students see videos on TED.com, why should be writing comments and rating the presenters.

Presentations they make, or essays they write should be shared as knowledge on YouTube or other sites as a contribution to research.

If they have such goals in mind, they may be motivated to make their ideas clearer and their research more complete.

I need to do some research on what kind of classroom projects for high schools or colleges have reached out of the classroom in that way. In January, one of my classes will be doing a major group project, so I hope I can tie something in.

More on this again some time.

2009年12月9日水曜日

AEP Blog #1 - Analysis of TED Video


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http://www.ted.com/talks/aubrey_de_grey_says_we_can_avoid_aging.html

My analysis of this presentation video is:

Impression:
De Gray's main point is that human aging can be delayed, and he predicts that 1000 year lifespans are very much possible if funding is provided for research. Is his talk persuasive? I would like to hear a professional critique by biological experts, but he seems to show that he is already extending the lifespan of mice steadily. Whether it is true or not, the talk is very valuable for us to think about the possible social consequences of living longer and longer. He argues that the idea that longer life is bad for society does not make sense. Aging causes death just like diseases, and it seems logical to find a way to reduce it. He argues that more funding should be given to anti-aging research.

He talks very, very fast, but I enjoyed listening to him to the end and felt the talk was informative, somewhat persuasive, and definitely thought-provoking. Also, cool beard. Makes an impact.

Strengths
His presentation strengths are
  • He includes a lot of information in a very short time. Very informative.
  • He talks with no notes and almost without looking at his slides. He knows his message and the ideas come out very clearly at an amazing speed.
  • Organized and logical. He gives his outline at the beginning and follows it to the end. The flow of logic is easy to understand.
  • His PowerPoint slides are not fancy, but they are effective because they match what he is saying. The key words match what he wants to emphasize. Very efficient.
Weaknesses
  • He really should talk slower. His persuasiveness would go up with fewer words and more pausing. Does he care whether the whole audience understands and keeps up? Fortunately, TED has video, so people can go back and listen if they have trouble following.
  • His body movements at the beginning seemed distracting.
  • More definitions of terms and more explanation of diagrams would have been helpful for me as a non-expert.

2009年12月8日火曜日

Notes upon observing a class at another college

I just finished observing a class taught by a friend of a friend at a national university in Tokyo. Thanks John!

The 90 min. class was a required English communication class for 2nd year engineering majors.

It was a very organized and well-planned lesson based on a textbook the American instructor himself had written. Almost all students were shy but engaged in all activities throughout and seemed comfortable with the teacher and the format of the class.

Just to type up my handwritten notes, this is how it went:

8:45am
Good morning! Students do a self-checked vocabulary quiz/practice sheet. It doubles as a form of taking attendance. There are different quizzes for different students. It is self-paced as in when you "pass" one, you go to the next. That is reflected in the grade in some way.

8:55
Students start using the textbook with the teacher giving directions in front, reviewing phrases from the previous week. Review methods include repeating after the teacher, shadowing, and working in pairs to find mistakes in the sentences about the lesson. Then after a yoga stretch (good for sleepy students--why not do it earlier?), all students have to stand, and the teacher starts to read some "mistaken" sentences about the previous lesson. When students hear a mistake such as a wrong word, they raise their hand and say "not __, but __" and they get to sit down.

9:05
All students are sitting down and they try to say the complete, correct sentences from the previous lesson (a six sentence listening narrative about crime and punishment) based on incomplete cues. Then they change the sentences to third person (since the original narrative was first person.) Finally, the teacher holds up 6 pictures from the narrative and students try their best (some with difficulty) to say the sentence for that picture when called on. They didn't do the "re-tell the whole story" - not sure why not.

9:15
New lesson on refugees - do vocabulary matching at the start, teacher asks for answers, students have no problem, brainstorm what the new photos mean, try to guess in pairs, no reporting to the whole class.

9:25
Students listen to the teacher read six sentences about the pictures and answer T/F questions and then transcribe them on the next attempt, with pair work to confirm, and then reporting their answers to the whole class.

9:45
In preparation for a reading section, teacher explains vocabulary list and reads answers to a matching exercise. Then students take turns reading line by line. Students can read, but not clearly or with emphasis. Need some help there? Also, no discussion about the text?

9:55
Write a blurb in the back of the textbook about "Who you appreciate and why?" in relation to the point that refugees appreciate when someone extends a helping hand (not explained, my guess). Not sure what students wrote - no example given either.

10:00
Free talk time. What recent news have you seen? What topics do you want to talk about? Totally free - the pair I sat with discussed TV watching - What do you like to watch? etc.

10:10 Country profile. The teacher gives a talk about Bolivia based on a blurb in the textbook.
10:13 Go to an earlier page in the text and talk about causes of war. Not sure why - just something to fill the last two minutes.

10:15 See you next week. Do your Independent Learning Journal! Student grades are adjusted in some way (complex to me) related to their journal of independent learning. Since it is a journal, why not make it a solid part of the grade?

Some general ideas on the class:
  1. At the beginning of class, I wondered if more energy might be raised by allowing students to ask each other how their week was. Vocabulary quizzes are good for review, but not energy raising. If feasible, perhaps a spoken activity for review?
  2. During the "news talk" "free talk" time toward the end, which was about 10 minutes, I found that the students were the most lively and were enjoying the freedom to express their ideas. But I was puzzled that the discussion was not related to what they had learned that day, so I wonder if more might be done with student discussions about the topics that are in the textbook. For example, if students are studying crime and punishment or refugees, why not structure an activity so that students are discussing their personal views on the issue (Should Japan accept more refugees?) or generating their own discussion questions?
  3. Also, although homework for independent study was assigned, I wondered if the class might be more effective and lively if a certain degree of preparation toward the class is required such as reading/listening to the text to finish some preliminary activities in advance. Of course some students may not do them, but if students had to keep a journal on a course management system such as Moodle, accountability could be kept.
  4. Also, it sounded like only one class would be used for student project presentations (they write a six sentence narrative and tell it to the class), but I wonder if a few more weeks could be used for presentations, possibly in a group format.
  5. The class was designed in a very helpful way to help students improve their comprehension of content, but a little more emphasis and use of class time on expression, including a chance to say ideas in groups or to the whole class and get feedback from the instructor on aspects such as pronunciation or articulation or phrasing might help students overcome their fear of speaking.
Just some ideas on what seemed to be a very effective class and curriculum!

Mark

2009年12月7日月曜日

Reactions to Anderson's "Assessing Writers"


This is the new book I'm reading with my research group on how to introduce the Reading Workshop and Writing Workshop method of instruction in college English classes and other levels of L1 and L2 education in Japan. We just finished reading How's It Going? and next is Chp.1 of our new book Assessing Writers. Unless I get lazy, I try to write all of my reactions in Japanese just like the other members who are all Japanese instructors and professors.

Chp. 7 "Conferring" & Chp. 8 "Linking Assessment to Instruction" Notes:

大切な点・勉強になった点
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  • Chp.7はAndersonのHow's It Going?の著書に書かれたConferring・Tutoringのシステムが凝縮されており良い復習。学生と1対1で話し合う時がもっとも良くWriterとしての学生を理解し、力を評価し、的確に指導できるチャンス。そのとき学生を人間として尊重し、どんなWritingの問題に直面しているのか良く聞き、どんなことを教えるか対話の中で決定し、それに絞って指導し、その場で学生の理解を確認し、一度やってみてもらい、Follow Upする。
    Andersonも書いたように、このようにやるべきことは分かっていても難しい。

  • 最終章のChp.8はDesigning Units of Studyが主題で、学生全員に対して行うMini-Lessonをどう計画するかが主な内容。非常に具体的に書いていて参考になる。一つ大切なのはInstructionを入れすぎず、学生たちが授業の中で作家として自由に書き・話し合う時間を確保できるようにすること。

    1)Deciding what lines of growth to focus on, p.211のチャートはすごい。Writing Assessment項目のチャートに全員の学生の名前を入れ、誰が何を今上達目標にしているかを記入。これを基にどんなMini-Lessonがより多くの学生にとってためになるかを考える。大学でもこれができるようになれないだろうか。可能だろうか?

    2)Initiative、Writing Well, Processに関する様々なMini-Lesson Unitの提案が参考になる。P.202.どれも「本物」のライターを育てるのに有効な技。Academic Writingを教える中でも「Writing with Detail」 「Writing for Social Action」 「Collaborating with Other Writers」などもっと組み込みたい項目が多くなった。

  • Afterword:自分のクラスのライターたちが未来の有名作家、政治家、経済学者、演出家の卵だと思って責任をもってWritingを教えよう、とAndersonは提唱している。とてもインパクトのある考え方だ。これをいつも忘れずにいたい。私のICUのクラスの学生の全員が将来英語で様々なものを書き、世界を変える可能性をもっているのだ、と思って毎回の授業やTutorialsに望みたい。
Writing教育の大先輩、Anderson氏に感謝!

考えたこと・やってみたいこと・疑問

  • →やってみたいのはConference後に学生がEメールでConferenceの内容を要約すること。もしくはWritingのProcessを記述するNoteやBlogに学生が記入し、それをお互いに確認できるようにすること。
  • →学生の強み・弱み・上達目標を記入するFormを作りたい。Web上で学生と共に記入していき、共有した情報によって焦点を絞った上達をクラス全員に提供していきたい。ノートも良いが、WebでGoogle Spreadsheetsを使えば全員の情報が一箇所に集約できるかも知れない。良いツールがあれば知りたい。要検索。
  • →Afterword p.228にある大切な言葉をOfficeに貼りたい。”Imagine your student roster has Abraham Lincoln, Martin Luther King, Ghandi, John Lennon, Stephen Hawking, Robert Frost (or Ryoma Sakamoto, Yukio Hatoyama, Kuwata Keisuke...)” You would do "the best assessment work of your career to ensure that what you taught them was exactly what they needed as they moved on their paths to greatness." "Even though I don't know my students' futures, I feel an awesome responsibility to them." "We are instrumental in creating our students' future's as writers." などいい言葉がたくさんありますが、私が最も好きなのは:

    「Dream of Your Students' Futures as Writers」です。これをスローガンにします。

Chp. 6 Notes: Assessing Students' Writing Processes

p. 143 Don't use good/bad labels for writers. All students are somewhere on the path to becoming lifelong writers. My job is to find where they are on that path and "nudge them forward." I like this way of looking at writing instruction!

p. 148 nice chart "What I am learning about this student as a writer?" "What do I need to teach this student?" I can't seem to do this for my current college writing classes. Why not? Nice example on p.151 of how he used it with Aurora.

p.157 "Like expert chess players, who through experience come to recognize...board configurations and know instantly what their next move should be, literacy teachers become able to quickly to spot the resemblances between students and know intuitively where to take students as writers." Just need to work on that step by step.



Chp. 5 Notes: Assessing Students' Writing Processes
summary:
Anderson starts by noting that all effective lifelong writers need to develop their own individual writing process preferences. An effective writing process is defined as the "tools and strategies he uses when he's rehearsing (preparing topics/research/ideas), drafting/revising, and editing that help him write well time and time again." Most of the strategies that Anderson mentions are classic or previously mentioned in his book--all good stuff: free writing or brainstorming or reading past entries in a writers notebook to find or develop a topic, refer to several examples of mentor texts to get ideas for organizing, do research to get ideas for details to include, draft and revise at the same time, ask a peer for help in making ideas/organization/voice/details clearer, and edit by reading with a voice or asking a partner for help or using computer checkers.

p.114-117 have good charts showing how knowledge of good writing will lead to good questions to ask during the process of preparing/drafting/revising, and which will lead to certain recommended writing strategies. For example, for the point "A good writer communicates meaning," one question is "Is what I'm saying coming through in this draft? Is it changing as I write?" and strategies to help at that stage are to Re-read the whole piece or ask a partner and ask "What do you think I am saying?" Showing students how we as teachers use processes in writing is invaluable too.

The most valuable part of the chapter is the discussion of how to get to know students writing processes. Observing how they write (in class), reading their writer's notebooks and drafts and edited drafts to see what they do, and discussing their processes with them in conferences are the best way.

☆学んだこと・やってみたい事 / Take-Aways

  • I want to do more discussions about students' writing processes in conferences, asking questions such as how did you (or who will you) go about revising this?
  • I want to take more note of writing processes as seen in student's edited drafts -- how they mark up their drafts after getting comments from peers and instructor. How can this be do with our current system of online documents? I am guessing students copy their draft file and then start revising on the computer--that makes it hard to see what was deleted or expanded. Perhaps just include a reflection question on how the draft was improved to the final. Emphasize the need for awareness of the process.
  • I want to show students more examples of what it means to revise. Currently I usually don't write essays along the same assignment guidelines and schedule as my students, but that would be very effective.
  • One thing I noticed in my classes this term was that peer reviewers were giving a lot of "editing" advice at the revision stage when commenting on drafts of classmates. I need to make the recommended process clearer -- Don't start polishing until the content is more finalized. Help each other revise on a essay-wide scale.
Chp. 4 Notes: Assessing How Well Students Write
私にはPainfulなチャプターでした。まだ完全には消化できていません。

痛かった理由は読み始めた時にはI know what good writing is - I teach this every week...と思い込んでいた自分が次第に壊れていったからです。

とても価値ある痛みです。

Writingのクラスを普段から教えているInstructorとして恥ずかしいことに、ジャンルを超えて根本的に「上手に書くこととはどういうことか?」と詰めて考えたり人と語った経験は殆ど自分にありません。Master's ProgramのクラスでSecond Language Writingというのを受けたこともあるのですが、そこでそのような考察をした記憶もありません。

What does it mean to write well? Andersonがp100のTeacher Actionで課題として出しているようにConstruct your own list of traits of good writingという事を一度じっくりやらなければいけないなと思いました。ReaderとしてもWriterとしても、そのような観点で文を見つめた経験が非常に少ないので、はっきり言って何が「Good Writing」なのか自分の中でまとまっていません。

Andersonの6つの項目はすべて根本的な力だと思いました。Communicate Meaning, Use Genre Knowledge, Structure the Writing, Write with Detail, Include a Voice, Use Conventions--一つ一つ例を使って丁寧に説明されていてとても参考になりました

いまでもAcademic WritingのChecklistみたいなものを学生に渡して「こうするともっとOrganized and Persuasiveだよ」と教えていますが、もっと根本的に書くことへのアプローチを考え直したいです。

Voiceは特に興味深い項目です。Academic Essayの指導の中で学生のVoiceを殺すような教え方をしている先生は とても多いと思います。Don't do this, Don't do thatみたいな指示が多いGenreです。I, you, weを使わない方がいい、The thesis statement must be at the end of the introductionなどなど。しかし、その指導の中でInspiringなModel TextやModel Writerが使われることは稀で、それはやはりInspiringな内容を書いているEssayには大抵豊かに作者自身の個人的なVoiceが入っているからだと思います。自分も"Objective"とVoiceのBalanceをもっと上手に学生に教えたいと思いました。



Chp. 3 Notes: "Assessing Students as Initiators of Writing"

興味深かった点
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  • p.54 "We need to discuss with students, both as a class and individually, the audiences with whom they can share their writing." 一番最近考えていることなので先に並べました。どんな「読者」と作品を共有できるか生徒と話し合う重要性。インターネット上には多くの読者がいるし、学内外にも機会はいろいろあるはず。教室内だけでしか共有しないことを早く卒業したい!(が思うように計画がまとまらない)

  • p. 27 "Students want to write" p.28 "I have to write. But I love having written" (quoting Don Graves (1993, originally by D. Parker?)  同感です!書くの辛いですが、書き終えて他の人から共感や反応を得た時の達成感は気持ちいいものです。

  • p.28 "The true test of whether Writing Workshop (or any writing class like ARW) has made a difference is not whether all of our students become professional (English) writers, but whether writing (in English) becomes a tool they use for responding to the world--to comfort, to convince, to pay tribute, to commemorate, to celebrate, and to speak out." (My parentheses) この目標はICUにおいてもっと意識しても良いのではないでしょうか。全員が英語で学術論文を書くようになる訳ではない。様々なジャンルの書き方を教え、Initiators of Writingになるようにするほうが良い気がする。もちろん、そうするとICUでの学びに必用なResearch Essayの力がそれだけ伸びないことになるが、最適なバランスは?

  • p.30 "25 Purposes for writing (or speaking): Nice chart - To celebrate an important person or event, To persuade, To bear witness to an event, To show how fascinating a subject is, To let someone know how to do sth., To help create a better society, To disagree with a position, To make someone laugh, To learn something about yourself, To be understood by others, To get someone to vote for you, To teach a moral or a lesson, To complain, To recommend an action or solution, To tell what happened, To share a passion with others, To explore an idea, To imagine how your/our life could be or what it would be like to be somebody else, To make plans, To share how you feel about someone or something, To make money or solicit donations, To remember, To heal, To leave something behind you. これらの内、ICUが書いている文章はいくつあるだろうか?主な種類は青い4つぐらい。もっとあってよさそうだ。ジャンルを自由に選ぶことができれば学生は興味や情熱を感じるものに関して自分で「目的」選んで書く経験を積むことができる。Persuasive Opinionに加え、Memoir/Personal Narrative、Short Story, Poetryがあっても良さそうな気がする。

  • p. 33 A writing teacher should be a COACH, not a judge. The goal is to support, not to rank.
  • p. 34-37 How to assess students as initiators of writing:
    1) Are they getting started smoothly,
    2) are they able to set their own purpose and audience for writing,
    3) are they developing good habits for developing their writing,
    4) are they actively asking for help from teacher and peers,
    5) are they actively seeking audiences to share their writing with,
    6) are they writing outside of the required class time/tasks?
    7) can they talk about why they are writing it, for who, and how they will write it
    「自分から作品を書き出す力 The ability to initiate writing」を評価するためには生徒を上記の観点から見ている必用がある。Writers with initiativeを伸ばすためには観察した上で苦労しているライターをサポートし啓発する必要がある。p.50の表 -困っている生徒をどうサポートするか詳細に書いてある。Nice ideas!
  • p. 49~54 - それ以前に、「自分で題材やジャンルを自由に選べる」Workshop的カリキュラムを作る必要がある。テストに振り回されすぎない。

考えたこと・やってみたいこと・疑問
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  • Initiators of Writingとしての力を明確に目標にしているところが新鮮。とても大切な力なのにAssessmentの項目になることが殆どない。それは教員が学生に「このジャンルをこの課題で書くように」と言い渡している限りは伸ばすことはできない。

    「Research-Based Argumentative Essay」とジャンルを決めてテクニックをマスターすることは決して悪いことではないが、それ以外のジャンルを勉強する必要もあるし、自分で自由に選ぶ経験も必要。しかし、時間が限られていると一つの優先的なジャンルに絞って極める方がいいのでは?というのがICUのカリキュラムの前提。

    今と違うやり方に学生がどう反応しどうライターとして成長するか見てみたい!

Chp. 2 Notes: "Getting Started, Developing an Assessment Lens"

興味深かった点
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  • "Good writing teachers, have a vision of the kind of writers they hope their students will become someday...High quality assessment starts with a vision of success. Our vision is a lens through which we can look at student writers." どんな作家・書き手になって欲しいか、教員のビジョンが評価の始まり。
  • Anderson's Vision: Help each student become a "lifelong writer" who initiates writing (knows that various genres of writing can DO things in the world), writes well (communicate meaning with details, structure writing, give the words a voice etc.), and has a process of writing that works for her. 生涯書き続けるライターは自分の力で「書き出す」ことができる。従来の作文指導に比べ、自分でジャンルも題も決めるワークショップ・メソッドの最大の強み。良い文章の特徴を理解し、自分にあった書き方・仕上げ方を見つけることも大切。
  • In terms of the process, "each writer uses a process slightly different from others." Student writers have to discover their own process. アイデアの出し方、ドラフトの作り方、チェックの仕方、それぞれ書くプロセスは違う。様々な方法を提示し、自分のプロセスを見つけるように試行錯誤してもらう。
  • Develop your own vision, and gather and record information by observing what students are doing (see in class), thinking (ask in conferences), and writing (read in their writing pieces, also read in their reflections). ビジョンを発展させるためには教員自信がライターとしての自分を見つめなおし、他のライターや教員のビジョンから学び続けなければいけない。そしてそのビジョンへ学生をどう伸ばすか、観察を通して考え、レッスンやコンファレンス実行する
考えたこと・やってみたいこと・疑問
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  • 自分のVisionは確立されているのか?ある程度は評価項目みたいなものを使っているが、それは「Good Academic Essay」に特化したもので、「Better Lifelong Writer」の教育にまだつながっていない部分がある。学生と「Better Lifelong Writer」に関する話し合いから始め、考え直したいと思う。特に「Has knowledge of various genres」の部分はICUではやっていないのでどうにか組み込みたい。Research Essayだけではなく、他のジャンルも含めて自分で何を書きたいのか考え、書き出し、仕上げるライターになって欲しい。英語で書くことの意味を様々な角度から感じて欲しい。と思いつつ、限られた時間で一つのジャンルに強くなってもらうことにも価値があるのでそのバランスを考えたい。
  • 学生が自分なりの書くプロセスを確立できるサポートをもっとしたい。What’s your process of brainstorming, taking notes, drafting, editingなどの話し合いに価値がある気がする。Mark’s processを示し、他のやり方も示し、いろいろ試してもらい、その中で有効なものをつかみ取って欲しい。
  • EssayやPortfolioの最後のSelf-AssessmentやReflectionは今後も書かせていきたい。「ライターとしての自分」を発見してもらうために不可欠。ただ、締め切りに向けては学生は振り返りを書く余裕がないので、PieceのDeadlineを設定して、それが提出されてからReflectionのDeadlineを設定したいと思う。
  • 疑問・みなさんへの質問:またメーリング・リストで書きたいと思います。

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Chp. 1 Notes: "Why Assess Writers?"

興味深い点
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Assessmentの定義とは生徒を「書き手」として知り、それを次の教育に反映すること
p. xiv "Assessment is the challenging intellectual work of getting to know students as writers and using what we learn about them to help us decide what they need to learn next (in conferences and mini-lessons)."
p.2 Good writing teachers are "constantly learning about their students as writers." (a habit of mind)

書き手としての生徒を知るとはどういうことか: Know why they write and for whom, Know what they know about writing well, Learn their writing processes

p.4-5 の表はすごい 右の欄がWhat am I learning about this student as a writer? 左の欄がWhat do I need to teach this student? 自分はこのプロセスはInformallyにEssayのコメントでやっているが、Formallyにやることが重要。

p.6-9 一年生Kaylaちゃんの例を使い、Learn About the Student -> Decide What to TeachのAssessmentのCycleを描写している。

p.11の表:
   縦が書くことに関する目標の一覧 これを読むだけでかなり面白い
    Voice: The student includes details that reveal who she is as an individual...creates intimacy with the reader. など
   横は生徒の名前一覧
   もしそのライターにその目標が必用ならば+をつける、目標の達成が見られるとそれに○をたす。

考えたこと・やってみたいこと・疑問
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  1. まず、Assessとは「Get to know your students as writers and assess their needs」と再認識。下手するとAssess(評価)とは生徒にどれだけ問題があるかを並べることや、Gradeをつけることと間違えやすい。
  2. やってみたいのはAndersonのような表の作成である。一人ひとりのライターに関する知識や上達目標エリアを書いてみたい。一覧表にしてみたら確かにMini-Lessonのトピックが選びやすい。
  3. 疑問:大学で人数が多かったり、授業時間が少ない場合、先生のLearning about the student as a writerのプロセスを学生にどう補助してもらうが大切だと思うが、どうやれば良いか?
    やはりPortfolioが頭に浮かぶ。学生がこれまで書いた作品、チェックリスト、上達したこと、難しかったこと、先生と設定した目標、今後書きたいことなどなど、学生と共同で作り上げたいものだが、どうやって?


My Reaction to Shannon's Introduction to Bioethics

Here are my summaries, reactions, and discussion questions on Shannon's text from An Introduction to Bioethics excerpted in our class reader. The photo is of author Thomas A. Shannon. Here's an interview article with him.

I. Main Points (100 words or more-focus on what you want!):

Shannon gives a number of main ethical theories and ethical terms that are useful to know when discussing bioethics dilemmas.

Ethical Theories:
  1. Consequentialism decides based on comparing the various effects of various decisions, but the problem is that there is no defined standard for choosing actions,
  2. Deontologicalism decides based on the duties that the individual has based on religion or other moral codes, but the problem is "the potential insensitivity to consequences."
  3. Rights ethics decides based on what "rights" the individual should have, but there is no indication of what should happen when individual rights are in conflict,
  4. Intuitionalism is a way of deciding by feeling, but it makes it difficult for one to communicate or persuade others.
Ethical Terms
  1. Autonomy: The idea that individuals should be allowed to decide their own destiny.
  2. Nonmalefience: The idea that we have an obligation to do no harm. If there is a conflict between one action and another, "proportionate reason" should be used to find the balance between burden/harm and benefit. (I didn't completely understand this)
  3. Beneficence: We have an obligation to help others as long as it does not hurt us. It sounds good...I guess? Is it human instinct or does it need to be taught?
  4. Justice: "What is a fair allocation of resources?" writes Shannon, but is that what justice is? That seems like "fairness" whereas justice is usually the process of finding the truth, no?
  5. Informed Consent: Some issues are the patient's competence, the amount of disclosure that the patient wants or should get, the patient's ability to comprehend, and the voluntariness of the patient to do what he wants feels is best without coercion.
  6. Paternalism: Should doctors or parents or other actors intervene and interrupt the autonomy of a person for some reason. Should people be forced to accept something against their will in some cases? This is very interesting. A blood transfusion for a Jehovah's witness or taking cigarettes away from a cancer patient. Should parents be restrained when they are prone to child abuse? Should the government makes laws to force people to do or not do something?
  7. Rights: Are rights duties or privileges? Shannon's explanation is confusing. He talks about how "positive rights" are the duty to do something and "negative rights" are the duty to not do something (like not stop a woman who wants to have an abortion). I'm confused. Aren't "rights" what people CAN do, not HAVE TO do. Need a better source on this? Try this article from the Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy. Also, do animals have rights? Do all humans have equal rights, and how do we determine that?
II. Critical Reactions (2 or more, agree/disagree/strange/need more evidence/examples etc. Think "How could this article be better?"):
  1. On p.16-3, line 32, Shannon writes "autonomy is the all-American virtue...it celebrates the hardy individualism for which our country is famous" but he does not mention what autonomy might mean in other cultures. I think autonomy should be a universal virtue, but I am an American, so I may be biased. He needs to write about this issue to help Americans see a more multicultural perspective.

  2. On p.16-5, line 11, Shannon talks about "impure" paternalism, which he says means deciding to interfere with the will of a person not only based on that person's welfare, but also the welfare of others. I think the word "impure" is strange here, as if it is somehow undesirable. In the example, the doctors try to force a father to get a blood transfusion based on not only the health of the father but also the welfare of the children who need a healthy father. Why do they call this "impure"? They need a better word.
Because it is mostly just explanations of basic ethical vocabulary and concepts, this text is difficult to react critically to! Don't worry too much if you can't find anything...The discussion questions below are more important.

III. Discussion Questions (and my answers, 3 or more)
  1. If a 1 year old child needs a blood transfusion to survive, but his parents refuse for religious reasons, what should the doctor do?
    I think the doctor should give the blood transfusion. I think the child's right to live is more important than the parent's right to decide the religion of the child. In this conflict of rights, the child wins.
  2. Should ethics be universal, or is it acceptable for ethics to be local or case-by-case? For example, should we try to find an answer like Kant's categorical imperative of "Act only according to that maxim whereby you can at the same time will that it should become a universal law."? Should we try to decide "All humans should always allow xxx in this specific case."
    I think universal agreement is difficult, so it may be more realistic to accept situational ethics. However, the United Nations has successfully developed some ethical codes about child's rights, for example, which suggests that universal agreement is better.
  3. Does the life of each person have equal value in all cases? For example, as Shannon writes on p.8 about justice, should a 15 year old person be given priority over an 80 year old person for a limited resource such as an organ transplant? Should it be a random lottery, or should the doctor decide based on whose life is "priority"?
    I think it is reasonable to give priority to significantly younger persons, but I would question the justice of any prioritization by healthiness or intelligence or social worth (p.7).
Whew! This took me about an hour to type. Is this too much homework for ELP students?

2009年12月6日日曜日

The search for our new camcorder

This is an interesting learning and decision-making experience. I've just spent a few hours on the Internet and an electronics store near my house trying to figure out what we're going to buy.

We had a Victor video camera that we bought a few months before my son was born, roughly seven years ago, but it jammed and died last month just as I fired it up to record his sports day.

So...we are on the market for a new one, but there are too many damn models and specifications! I haven't cornered a sales guy yet, but I think I'll have to do that next to get some answers.

The goal is to get something reasonably priced but
  1. is fairly small and easy to carry around (SD card memory makes thing lighter it seems)
  2. has good zoom for kids sports events (20x?) and decent image stabilization,
  3. has a good battery life (2 hours would be nice),
  4. takes "good enough" video to play on a larger TV screen, say 32 or 37 inch, when we burn DVDs for relatives (so...how many pixels do we need? and do we need High Definition?)
  5. takes good enough still photos with resolution to print nice post cards (300 Mega pixels?)
  6. is easy to output video to a computer or hard drive for editing or burning or storage (so no DV tapes any more, but is it better to have a HDD capacity as well as SD cards?)
CNET recommends the Canon Vixia HF20/21 as the best current buy (See review). I kind of liked the look and feel when I was at the store today, so hmm...this may work.
On Japan's online user review/ sale comparison site Kakaku.com, it is about 56,000yen.

The most popular item on Kakaku.com seems to be the JVC Everio HM400, priced around 66,700yen. I played with this at the store today and it seemed very nice. Amazing picture quality and good battery life and recording memory capacity 32GB plus slots for additional SD cards if needed. SD card memory prices will keep falling too.

But what's the best buy? While both of those above were nice, some of the lesser spec models also seemed enough for our purposes. I mean, why not go with the HM200 which is almost half the price at 37,000? Will it make a big difference?

Kakaku does a cool comparison chart like this, which shows the HM200 to be weaker in battery life as well as image resolution. In the store today, I felt is somewhat, but the HM200 seemed OK. I like that the HM200 is lighter due to having to HDD memory. It comes with two 8GB SDHC cards instead (which retail for about 2500~4000yen each), which only records about 80 minutes. We'll probaby need to buy SDHC cards for more memory.

2009年12月4日金曜日

Online Documentaries for ARW Winter



Films related to Bioethics or "Visions of the Future" Issues

I just started up a content-based unit on bioethics (especially cloning, but not limited to that) and hope to introduce (or possibly show) some good films to my students. In January, we will move onto a until called Visions of the Future that deals with issues of progress and human development. So, here are some ideas:

Bioethics:
Some are taken from the summary of this book, Bioethics in the Movies.

My Sister's Keeper (2009, one sibling used to keep the other alive, rights to one's own body)

The Island (clones used for medical purposes)

Blade Runner (clones, engineered humans)

Gattaca (genetically engineered humans)

Million Dollar Baby (euthanasia)

The Sea Inside (euthanasia- never seen this yet)

Dirty Pretty Things (illegal sale of organs, never seen this one yet)

Dead Man Walking (death penalty)

Sicko (health insurance issues)

Supersize Me (fast food industry)

The Brave New World (1980, freely downloadable, cloning)

The Boys from Brazil (1978, cloning)


Visions of the Future:

Minority Report (Orwellian government)

Surrogates (2008, Humans use mentally remote controlled androids to their work outside of the house)

Brazil (Recommended here. Even more Orwellian? But I haven't seen this yet)

An Inconvenient Truth (Global Warming)

Other ideas? Please let me know by leaving a comment!

More links for movies:

Top 10 Bioethics Movies: http://www.wellsphere.com/bioethics-article/the-top-10-medical-bioethical-movies-you-ve-probably-never-seen/521400

Ethics Movies: http://faculty.deanza.edu/burkelarry/stories/storyReader$163

2009年11月30日月曜日

How's It Going: Reactions to the Afterword + Final Thoughts


p.189-191 Anderson goes back through his stored away boxes of past writing class portfolios, and remembers how his students affected him with their writing about affairs in their lives. Then he writes: "To teach writing well--to confer with student writers well--we must be affected by our students and the details of their lives. That is, we need to fall in love with our students for the first time."

"They (the students) too need to be affected by the details of our lives. Conferences go well when students come to see us as people with whom they genuinely want to talk."

"We should know at least five details about the lives and interests of each of our students."

I pondered these quotes. Fall in love? As a college instructor in a program focused on developing my students "academic essay" writing skills, I very rarely have a chance to be "affected" by the writing of my students. I am often impressed by the thoughts they have, and I love working with my students, but I never considered myself as falling in love with them. I also feel like I know so little about the lives of my students after working with them for 10 week terms.

I learned many things from How's It Going: How to structure conferences, How to prepare students and myself to be ready for conferences, How to use Mentor Texts to get students learning good style, and How to create Mini-Lessons that meet the needs of my class.

But can I learn to design college writing classes so that I am affected and in love with my student writers?? To do that, I would need to allow students to be WRITERS in the truest sense--to write about topics that mean the most to them no matter how "unacademic" they may be. To allow them to write genres other than the thesis-driven argumentative research essay.

In my current program, I don't have much of a choice about this. But I feel a change is needed. Anderson has turned me on to this. I want to try a conference-based workshop style writing class, even on a small scale.

Grading 2.0: Evaluation in the Digital Age

http://www.hastac.org/forums/hastac-scholars-discussions/grading-20-evaluation-digital-age

Very interesting consideration of how we may need to re-think grading and assessment practices.

I'm particularly interested in how Learning Portfolios could replace letter grades for competitive screening functions such as scholarships, graduate school applications, and job application.

As a teacher, I think it would be much more fulfilling to write up a strengths/weaknesses blurb and add it to the student's portfolio at the end of the term based on the performance of the student rather than give a letter or point grade. Would this be any more time consuming than punching in quiz grade numbers to arrive at some kind of number? Perhaps a little, but it would drive us to really assess the value of what the student has done and identify where more work is needed.

One example I've started to look at is the Learning Record. I need some more time to figure out how this exactly works and will try to get back to it.
http://www.cwrl.utexas.edu/~Syverson/olr/intro.html

2009年11月28日土曜日

はじめてのアクション・リサーチ(佐野正之編著)から学ぶ

アクション・リサーチの重要性は大学院時代から把握しているが、継続的にまとまった形で行ったことがない。授業に関する論文を書いている時の研究課題は勿論アクション・リサーチの一種であるが、理想的には各学期の各授業でなんらかの研究課題を小さくても、直感的でもいいから文章にしたい。このブログで様々な授業の改善計画や反省文を書いたりしているが、もっとまとまった形にしてみよう!という意気込みで以前他校の教授からご紹介いただいた佐野正之編著の「はじめてのアクション・リサーチ、英語の授業を改善するために」(大修館2005)で勉強し直すことにしました。

英語教育に従事して約10年、大学で英語を教えることにある程度自信というか、慣れみたいものはあるが、今外国語教育に使っているアプローチや考え方をもう一度根本から「こんなやり方でほんまにええんかぁ?」と問い直したい。そしてそのプロセスにより直感的な「教育者」としての自信だけでなく「教育研究者」としてより強い自信と自覚を備えたい。

Action Research = From Nunan (1989) Understanding the Language Classroom: A Guide for Teaching Initiated Action. Prentice Hall.

  1. 問題の発見 もっとこうだったらいいな、と思う点で、なるべくほぼ学生全員に共通する点
  2. 事前調査  簡単な質的、量的調査、アンケート、インタビューなど
  3. リサーチクエスチョンの設定  具体的な問題に対して実施可能な対策があり、期間内に具体的で現実的で測定可能な目標をつけられる (SMART goal=specific, measurable, attainable, realistic, time-sensitive) Example: How should my teaching method/curriculum for...be changed so that in an end of term survey 90% of students feel... and in the end of term assessment 80% of students can...
  4. 仮説の設定 First work through, Sano's iceberg model for finding causes underlying the performance problem. Then, upon identifying possible causes, set a hypothesis for improvement
    Level 1 Performance
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    Level 2 Amount or Type of Practice / Activities
    Level 3 Linguistic Knowledge
    Level 4 Attitude / Motivation
    Level 5 Classroom Management of Instructor (not explained--seems to overlap with )
  5. 計画の実践 the "D" in PDCA
  6. 結果の検証
  7. 報告
  8. 結果の反映
例えば、来週から始まるICUのSpeakingのクラスの場合、どんなARが可能か考えて8つのStepで進めてみたいと思います。

11月29日の河口湖フルマラソン~ 熱でダウンして棄権です

いや~ 来ちゃいました。体調を崩して明日のマラソンは棄権です。

26日の木曜、朝からちょっと体調悪いなと思いつつThanksgivingを両親と祝うため長野県まで運転。到着したらかなり熱が出ていて病院行ったところインフルエンザ検査は陰性だが、熱は39.5°まで上っていて、関節が痛い、そして喉と気管支が痛く腫れあがっている。よっぽど新型インフルかなと思わせる症状だったのに、検査は陰性でとりあえず安心。でも感染初期の陰性は間違っている可能性もあるということで抗生物質とタミフルの両方を出されました。

長野で一泊の予定も切り上げて木曜の内に妻の運転で東京へ戻り寝込むも、今日土曜になってもまだ熱と腫れが続き、歩くのも辛い状態なので残念ながら明日の河口湖マラソンは棄権するしかないでしょう。

初めての棄権です。7000円の参加料がもったいない!

2009年11月27日金曜日

Gearing up for AASP Winter 2009-2010--decisions, decisions

I'm just brainstorming here to develop some ideas for the following course I will be teaching and coordinating for the second time. 5 teachers will be working together to teach about 160 students.

1) Advanced Academic Speaking for Freshmen (1 period per week, 9 classes in total):

In the Autumn term, we focused on public speaking and group presentation skills. In the Winter term, I am really not sure what is best. We could do more public speaking and individual presentation skills, or we could focus on debate, or some mixture of those two. Of course, there are many other academic speaking skills we could focus on such as problem solving, tactfulness, giving advice, making predictions etc. etc. but presentations and debate/discussion are probably what will help students prepare for English language classes at ICU.

Some students have mentioned that focusing on only one main skill such as presentations or discussions is tedious and they want more "variety" of skills. We can do a variety in a shallow way, or focus and go deeply. I tend to think the shallow one-class topics don't have much meaning...and my syllabus reflects that. I prefer to do the same set of skills a few times to aim for mastery. However, at the same time, I can see the value of keeping students excited about learning new things or doing new types of activities in classes, so I want to keep that in the balance too.

A mixture of presentations and debate would mean students would make a short presentation arguing for a certain position and that would be followed by some kind of debate. My sophomore classes have often mentioned that they feel it is important to learn debate skills, so I think doing some kind of introduction in Winter term will be valuable. The only problem with setting up a debate is that a good debate depends a lot on research but this class is designated as a "lab" class where outside preparation is to be minimal. If we do small debates with little research, the content may feel shallow; however, for learning basic skills and expressions for debate, that may be fine. Also, it may not be good to call it debate because that implies students will learn a certain structure for debate competitions, which is not an objective of this class. It may be better to call it something like Critical Academic Discussions, where the goal is not to debate to win, but to conduct a critical examination of the arguments for a certain proposition in a collaborative manner.

I know from experience that this is the point that many students still have trouble with. When given a topic to discuss, they fail to examine the arguments for their viewpoints in depth, and they need to enhance this ability. It may be tough for some of the struggling students (who may benefit from lighter, more structured activities), but they need to work on those, so we will try to give lots of scaffolding to work on that and also try to keep it fun with a reasonable stress level and workload.

How would the syllabus for debate (critical academic discussions) work? What would the components be?
  • Mini-lessons: In most classes, we should provide teacher presentations of techniques and useful phrases, possibly accompanied by video. Students evaluations of AASP in the past often complain about the lack of instruction, and while class time is limited, it seems reasonable to spend 5~10 to present some key points that will help students with their speaking.
  • Opinion Presentations: In each period, a chance for some students (or all?) to present their viewpoints on an issue within small groups (not to the whole class since that takes too long?). Some presentations can be prepared, while some can be spontaneous. For example, if some students know they need to prepare a viewpoint for that class, they can present their view based on prepared notes and charts-visual representation of information is important! Then, the students who heard that presentation can try to make a short presentation to argue against it spontaneously with just a little preparation.
  • Critical Discussions: Based on the presented opinion on the issue, have some kind of structured discussion where one side attempts to argue the opposite view, and then each side examines the arguments that have been presented. At the end, some kind of summarizing and reporting should occur as well.
  • Teacher Observations & Suggestions: Another complaint that some students have had is that in many classes, the teachers seem to offer no suggestions on what they are doing. They only get peer comments and self-evaluations. This can be fairly easily remedied by having a system of teachers observing students in a set schedule
  • Reflections/Goals-Setting: We want to set up an effective learning cycle where each student is identifying his/her own difficulties with speaking and trying to overcome them in subsequent classes. Of course, that will only work if 1) the students are invested in developing the skills that are being assessed, and 2) students feel the assessment process is designed in a fair way that does not make them feel compared, i.e. considered less valuable than more talented speakers in the class, and 3) the workload for reflection is reasonable and does not excessively eat up time and energy for practice and preparation.
  • Consideration of Mixed Levels: I'm not sure how to do this, but one reality we have to consider is that we have a wide spectrum of skill levels for English speaking and critical thinking in these classes. Some students love to speak in English but do not have very strong critical thinking skills. Others have good ideas, but fail to get them out in English. Still others may need much development in both areas. So...how do we consider these for curriculum design and evaluation purposes? Basically, we want students to have plenty of choices to do what they feel is just right for them. We also want to stress that we are evaluating by engagement and improvement performance in the target areas rather than by a rankinkg of speaking abilities. This needs to be made clear in the first class along with the evaluation/grading system.

Class 1: Introduce/show what we mean by critical academic discussion skills (CADs, if we want add another acrynom to the world's acronym overload)

Classes 2, 3, 4: Mini-lessons (10 min.) 1~3 + Round 1 of CADs (5~7 min. * 7 students per class)- Students bring their opinions for presentation and critical discussion in each class. In a traditional P&D structure a ICU, each student gets 15 minutes. In a 70 minute class, the goal should be for the teacher to observe 6 to 7 students. But will this work? This is where I have been stuck for the past few days and need to work this out.

Lesson Plan for 18~24 students, 60 minutes with elbow room
00min Hi, speaking warm-up, confirm schedule
05min Mini-lesson, points to focus on today
15min CADs start and run for 45 min.--6 groups of 3 or 4 students, or 3 or 4 groups of 6 students? The advantage of the smaller groups is they will interact more. The advantage of the bigger groups is they will feel the teacher's presence more. Why not have some big groups and small groups? For example, the students who are "on the spot" for that day will be in the teacher's circle of 6 or 7 being recorded and observed. The other students will have a freer format in smaller groups--and get 10~15 minutes each to practice their skills-present, listen to counter arguments or critical questions, exchange ideas and then close with some kind of consensus or summary to report.
60min CADs finish, final comments by instructor

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If a student is absent, what happens? Squeeze him in the next period?

What topics would be good? Topic choice for an "argumentative" question is diffcult for many students. Students will be free to choose their own? I can give a number of topics (and data sheets that give the pros and cons-just need 7 topics or so) and then have to decide what to do about overlap--which can be boring-cloning, cloning, cloning--, but is not a big problem. One simulation of a group is:

Presenter 1: Should euthanasia be legal in Japan?

Presenter 2: Should commercial surrogacy be allowed in Japan in the future?

Presenter 3: Should pre-natal testing be allowed?

Presenter 4: Should cloning be allowed?

Presenter 5:

Or, shall we forget the CAD centered approach and go with more day by day topics and activities? Today we will study how to disagree politely (review of ASP), Today we will ask critical questions about sources, assumptions, opposite views, . Today, we will study how to conclude a presentation. Today we will practice tactfulness, Today will we will practice making and explaining visuals for an argument, etc. Do that for six topics and the course is finished. The only way the students will be evaluated is how consistently they came to class and participated actively--all students can get an easy A.

They could also choose topics out of a hat and try to do spontaneous opinion presentations--Hmm...if we set a list of topics and say that the evaluation will be based on how well they deal with these topics at the end of the term, that may be an interesting way to get around topic choices.

2009年11月20日金曜日

Issues in ELT in Japan-Syllabus

SE: Issues in English Education in Japan

Mark Christianson, ILC-273, (0422) 33-3497, markc@icu.ac.jp, Email for appointments

Why do all Japanese students have to study English? Why not Chinese? Do you feel it is reasonable to start English language classes in Japanese elementary schools? Why not start in college? Also, why do many Japanese students who study English intensively for several years still feel a lack of confidence in their ability? What are some of the main difficulties that Japanese learners of English face? What is MEXTs policy of English language education in the first place? How should Japanese society perceive the role of English as a foreign language and what actions should educators and government leaders take in the next decades?

The goal of the course will be for you to develop your ideas regarding the above issues based on reading various viewpoints and analyzing the various arguments. The class will include discussions and debates, a reading journal, opinion essays, and a final presentation. The ultimate, most important goal is the development of your ability to use English for academic communication in speaking and writing. For each issue, we will try to have a cycle of Read, Discuss, Research, Write, Debate, Reflect.

Date

Homework Due


Class Activities (Can change by mutual agreement)


1. 9/9 W

Welcome!


Intro, ice-breaking, brainstorm topics of interest


2. 9/14 M
Moodle No.1
Your personal "Issues of English Education in Japan"
3. 9/16 W
RJ No.1

Issue 1: Is Japan’s English education a failure?

4. 9/21 M
Moodle No.2
Issue 1: Debate Skill Basics, Preparation
*9/23 W
Holiday

5. 9/28 M
Debate Prep
Issue 1: Debate Day
6. 9/30 W
RJ No.2

Issue 2: Should English education start from 1st grade?

7. 10/5 M
Debate Prep
Issue 2: Debate Preparation
8. 10/7 W
Opinion No.2Issue 2: Debate Day
9. 10/12 M
RJ-Reflection
Mid-term reflection, make presentation groups
10. 10/14 WResearch
Group Work Day
11. 10/19 MRJ No. 3

Issue 3: How should Japan’s language policy be changed? (tbd)

12. 10/21 WDebate Prep
Issue 3: Debate Preparation
13. 10/26 MOpinion No.3Issue 3: Debate Day
14.10/28 W
Group OutlineGroup Work Day
*11/2
Holiday

15. 11/4 W
Visual Aids
Rehearsal tutorials with Mark (11/4 or other day)
16. 11/9 M
Practice!
Presentation Day
17. 11/11 W
Final Reflection
Presentation Day, Final Summary


Participation 20%, Moodle Tasks/Writing 30%, Presentation 30%, Reading Journal 20%

Basically, A Excellent= 91%+, B Good=81%+, C Satisfactory=70%+, D=60%+, E=59% or less, but final grades will follow the criteria given in the ELP Student Handbook p.11-13.


Key Assignments

Participation 20%

Participation means how well you attended and participated in classes, on time, with sufficient preparation. Here are some guidelines for penalities related to participation:

Absent with no explanation = -2% per class

Absent with explanation = -1% (If you have a good reason, it may be no penalty, too.)

Late with no good reason such as official train delay = -1% per class

Not prepared or not actively participating in class = -1% per class


Moodle Tasks/Writing 30%

We will also have a class website on Moodle, you will be evaluated on how well-written your opinions or ideas were and also how well you responded to your classmatess ideas. Each week, your teacher will give you specific instructions for Moodle, and most tasks will be to write your opinion and reasons prior to the debates or discussions, and to write comments to your classmates ideas. Some guidelines will be:

Submitted/Essay Moodle posting is late, short, or unclearly written with many mistakes = -1%

Did not write any reactions to other students Moodle opinions = -1%


Final Group Presentation (30%)

The class will be divided into four groups, and each group will make a presentation of 20-30 minutes on a topic of your choice. Each person must speak for at least 3~4 minutes. A detailed outline or the presentation and PowerPoint slides must be submitted by the group in advance. Each person will be graded by individual performance and also the contribution to the group effort. We will make groups around the beginning of October.

Reading Reaction Journal (20%)

Each of you must submit a Reading Reaction Journal on designated dates during the term. Your Reading Reaction Journal should be a well-organized record of your reading notes, questions, reactions, vocabulary learning, and other learning in this course. Also, if you prefer to do an "e-Journal" using a blog or other format, that is also welcome, but you will need to print it to bring it to class to use for discussions.

Each Journal entry will be evaluated as Excellent 4pts(wow! beyond criteria) , Good 3pts(=meeting all criteria well) , Mostly Good 2pts (meeting most criteria), or Need to do more! 1pt.


I'll give more details on each assignment step by step, so please ask me about any unclear points.